Permission to Write: How J. Scott Savage Finally Wrote Farworld

In February I went to a launch party for J. Scott Savage’s book Air Keep, the third in his Farworld series. The Provo Library put it on, and it was a great event (think: face painting, sugar cookies, cardboard cutouts). But before all the festivities took place, J. Scott Savage took a few minutes to talk about writing the Farworld series. Farworld 3 Cover

He started off by telling us that he’d had the idea for a long time. It was an idea that wouldn’t let him go, though he knew it would be different than anything he’d written before. Savage considered himself a writer of adult books, and this new idea was about a boy in a wheelchair. It was also about magic—one of Savage’s favorite genres to read, but not one he’d ever tried to write.

He put it out of his head and went on with his other work, but the idea kept popping up again and again.

Finally, he’d had enough. He decided to prove to himself that he couldn’t write a YA Fantasy.

He was traveling for work, staying in a hotel room, and thinking about Farworld again. And even though he wasn’t convinced it was something he could pull off, he pulled out his laptop, opened a blank document, and began to type.

He wrote for an hour at first, then two, then three. Then, in what seemed like a second, he sat back and saw the first bits of daylight peeking through the windows. He’d not only written into the night, he’d written through it.

Taking Savage’s story to heart, this week I wanted to prove something to myself: I’m not a picture book writer. Over the years I’ve had lots of ideas for picture books. Some of them good, some of them embarrassing and awful. And, like Savage, I never gave myself permission to take any of these ideas seriously. I write novels, not picture books.

But this week I sat down with my idea and an empty notebook. I had kids dumping legos all over each other and pulling fur off the cat, but amid the chaos I set my pen down and wrote through what was rattling around in my head. I wrote and wrote and wrote, and I poured out three bowls of applesauce (and wiped applesauce off the floor and the couch and the wall, why was it on the wall?), and then I wrote some more.

And after an hour I’d filled up five pages, front and back, of notes and prose. It wasn’t Where the Wild Things Are, but it was something. Some of it was even funny. I revised and re-arranged and tossed some pages and wrote new ones. As I did, I thought about other ideas that, with my permission, I’ll also write down.  I didn’t fail as miserably as I thought I would, and though the manuscript is far from perfect, I’m surprised with how the wiggly idea grew into a real story.

Perhaps you’re like me, telling yourself that you can’t write picture books or novels or The Great American Dystopian Romance (is that a thing?). Maybe you have an idea wiggling in your head, an idea that’s been dancing like mad around in your brain for ages. Or maybe your idea is more of a wall-flower: quiet, doing a half-shimmy in the corner. Either way, it won’t stop wiggling until you give yourself permission to write it down.

If you’re interested in more stories from published authors, check out our morning workshops. J. Scott Savage is teaching our middle grade class this year, and promises to bring his best, wiggliest ideas with him. Earlybird registration ends in three days (gasp!) so hurry on over and sign up.

Also, don’t forget to check out our Spread the Word Contest, going on right now at the blog. Click here for details.

New Contest: Spread the Word about WIFYR

New contest: Share the WIFYR Word! The person who gets the word out to the most places/people will win a page critique from a soon-to-be announced surprise guest.

Here’s how it works: Talk about what you love about the WIFYR conference in every way you can. Blog, post, tweet, email, tell friends. Suggestions: let them know about the deadline extension for the WIFYR writing contest with its award of $1000 plus potential publication, the a la carte mini workshops, remind people about the early bird registration extension, the free Keynote speech with Utah’s Poet Laureate Lance Larsen, the discount for SCBWI members, etc. Limit of two posts per day on Facebook and Twitter. When tweeting, please use the hashtag #wifyr2013. You will also get points for liking the WIFYR Facebook page, signing up for the WIFYR email newsletter list, or making comments on the blog.

Us the comments box below to tell us how many times you shared the WIFYR word, and please include a list of places you posted, including blog links, and remember to use #wifyr2013 when you tweet.

Deadlines are Approaching

The Writing and Illustrating for Young Readers Conference (WIFYR) is dedicated to helping beginners to professionals hone their craft. The five day morning workshops and shorter mini workshops offer small-group learning and include faculty and group critiques. Round off each day with afternoon lectures from a variety of professional faculty, agents and editors.

Early Bird pricing ends April 30, 2013, so enroll now!

Second Annual WIFYR Writing Contest
Hurry, time is running out! This excellent contest features a prize of 1000 dollars and a chance to be published through Familius Publishing! However this great contest ends on April 27th at midnight, so don’t waste any time.

WIFYR Success Stories: Interview with Debut Author Courtney Alameda

Courtney Alameda, one of our participants in 2013, signed with agent John Cusick (of the Greenhouse Literary Agency) after connecting with him at WIFYR last year. Since then she has sold her first book, SHUTTER, to Feiwel & Friends, coming out iMarch 2013n fall 2014. She took some time to talk to us about her recent success.

Tell us a little about yourself. Did you always want to write?

I live a larger life inside my imagination than outside of it, certainly! From a very young age, perhaps as young as six, I began following characters around in my head. They made me into a child insomniac, because their stories were far more interesting to me than sleep. As I got older and read wider, those stories started flowing out and onto the page. I have always been a storyteller; however, it didn’t occur to me to pursue writing professionally until I hit college.

What does your schedule look like nowadays? Is it hard to find time to write?

I cannot believe how busy I’ve become in the last four weeks! Everything is so overwhelming, especially as I work to build a solid foundation for a future marketing campaign, network with other kidlit authors and those who are in my debut year, keep pace with my critique partners, and prepare mentally and emotionally for my editorial letter (which will arrive any day now). I’m still working full-time, too, which eats up almost 50 hours of my week. I’m in survival mode eighteen to twenty hours a day and mainline caffeine like a junkie. Are we having fun yet? Yes we are!

Insofar as finding time to write is concerned, I believe the best advice I ever got was from best-selling author Markus Zusak (and I paraphrase greatly): “To succeed, writing must always be your first priority. If it cannot be your first, then it must be your second.” For me, that means writing in the wee hours, losing sleep and free time. It means not seeing all the television programs and movies that people buzz about, and saving any scraps of free time for the books I should be reading. It means turning off the internet when I’m writing, and squeezing as much productivity out of each hour. It means I live to work, in the eventual hope that I will write to live.

Nothing worth doing is ever easy, surely.

When did you first get involved with WIFYR? Can you tell us about your experience at the conference?

My first year at WIFYR was in 2010 with Alane Ferguson. It was truly a watershed week for me: it gave me the confidence I needed to continue with my work, the right tools to treat it as a professional endeavor, and a good grip on what to expect from the industry. Moreover, I met many wonderful people and made friends, many of whom I am still working and critiquing for today.

Now that I think on it, SHUTTER was born in Alane’s workshop during a quick exercise. She assigned us to write a short, eerie scene using a handful of paint chip colors we’d chosen earlier. I don’t remember what paint chip colors were, but I certainly remember writing a scene about a girl armed with a camera. I was so enamored with the character, I started developing her story the very next week. So I suppose you can say SHUTTER is a WIFYR success story from start to finish!

Did it help to have your writing reviewed by published authors?

I cannot express how deep my gratitude is to the authors I have had the opportunity to work with! After Alane, I was an assistant to Holly Black in 2011. Not only was Holly a delight, but she identified a couple of problematic elements with SHUTTER and the world therein. Thanks to her feedback—plus her great lecture on building magic systems—I threw my old manuscript out and began afresh. The novel I produced over the next year was entirely unlike anything I’d written before in terms of its depth and creativity, and I have Holly’s input to thank for it!

In 2012, I had the great pleasure of assisting Cynthia Leitich Smith, who taught me more about the craft of writing (and of a writer’s life) than any other. She turned me on to SELF-EDITING FOR FICTION WRITERS, which was immensely helpful into learning how to hone many of the finer points in my writing. I am currently re-reading the book in preparation for my editorial letter, and will probably make it an annual tradition until it’s branded on my brain. Also, Cynthia played a vital role in connecting me to John, for which I will be forever grateful to her.

In short, the morning workshops were integral to my development as a writer. I would not be where I am now without the scaffolding and education I received annually at WIFYR. It’s important to remember that WIFYR is so much more than words on the page, too—it’s learning to critique and be critiqued, developing an understanding of the industry, and networking with fellow writers. I cannot underscore how crucial networking at WIFYR has been for me; some of my richest friendships have been developed during the conference, and I treasure my friends above all else.

You met your agent, John Cusick, at our conference last year. How and why did you decide to work together?

Simple. I recognized something of myself in John, a certain hunger for and dedication to excellence. He had polish, class, eloquence, and a self-possession that I knew would equate to great success in the future. He’s also one of the kindest and most genuine people I have ever met, which are requisite skills for anyone I’m going to trust with my work. Moreover, I wanted to find a younger agent whom I could build a long-term career with, rather than someone with an established list and career. John is a marvel, a talented writer in his own right, and cares deeply about his clients. I have no doubt that it was these qualities (and many more) that landed him a spot as an agent at the prestigious Greenhouse Literary agency this year.

And there might have been a conversation or two that went something like this:

Me: “I like weird monsters. Really messed-up stuff.”
John: “Ever played SILENT HILL?”*

So when he offered representation, the first word out of my mouth was yes. I didn’t even have to think about it (even though he made me consider it about it for twenty-four hours). I honestly couldn’t have made a better decision if I’d tried, and I’m grateful I met John before starting the query process.

*For those of you who are not acquainted with video games, SILENT HILL is a survival-horror franchise famous for its deeply symbolic, nightmarish monsters.

You recently sold your first novel. Was this the first novel you wrote, or have there been others?

SHUTTER is not my first novel, not by a long shot. In the last ten years, I’ve written approximately 1.5 million words toward various projects, all of which were important learning experiences. As I never really thought I was any good (and still don’t), I never bothered to query agents. I was shocked when John was interested in the novel. SHOCKED. I think I’m still shocked and awed, but am pleased to say I have nary a rejection letter to my name. Writers can make their own luck through hard work and patience.

In short, I believe pre-published writers should focus on improving their craft, rather than on finding an agent. (I know, I hated hearing that too, but it’s true!) Attend conferences. Put your work in front of professionals. Read voraciously. Write every day. Query only when you feel ready. And when the time is right, industry cogs will start turning for you.

Can you tell us about finding a publisher? How did you find a home for your book?
The submissions process is harrowing, even if all the author has to do is be patient and check her email every 2.5 minutes. Thank heaven for the current industry model, and for agents who stand between writers and publishers! Any peace of mind I had stemmed from the knowledge that John would take excellent care of my work.

Luckily for my nerves, we were only out two weeks before Liz Szabla at Feiwel & Friends wanted to take SHUTTER to acquisitions. I couldn’t believe we’d gotten so far, so quickly; nor could I believe that it was with Feiwel & Friends, the publisher I most wanted to be with. I’d had the good fortune to host Jean Feiwel in January of 2012 when she toured with Marissa Meyer (author of CINDER), and had the greatest respect and admiration for her and her imprint.

So John and I spent another ten days waiting to hear the acquisition board’s decision. Then on a Wednesday afternoon, John’s name popped up on my caller ID and my life changed forever. It is a great honor to be on Feiwel & Friends’ list, and to be working with Liz Szabla, and I couldn’t be more thrilled with the way things turned out!

What’s the book about and when can we see it in print?

The basic synopsis for SHUTTER goes like this:
Seventeen-year-old Micheline Helsing sees dead people. . . in Technicolor. As a tetrachromat, Micheline sees the auras of the undead in a spectrum: reanimated corpses ooze crimson light, vampire veins glow cobalt blue, and specters rage in ultraviolet ghostlight. Only a tetrachromat like Micheline can see and reap a ghost, and nobody captures them on film like she does.

But when a routine exorcism goes awry, Micheline winds up soulchained to the very entity she sought to capture. As tattoo-like chains spread under her skin, she learns that if she can’t exorcise her captor in seven days or less, she and the boys in her reaping cohort are dead. With the clock ticking and Helsing agents hunting them through the streets of San Francisco, Micheline must find a way to capture her entity on film. . . or else.

Micheline & co. should be hitting shelves in Fall 2014!

What advice do you have for aspiring writers and conference-goers? Is there anything you wish you knew earlier, or anything you would have done differently?

When attending conferences, work and write hard. Meet new people with an open heart. Do things that frighten you. Done right, you will leave the conference with a wealth of new skills, new information, and new friends.

All writers should write, read, and live voraciously—the best way to create a dynamic character is to be dynamic yourself. In terms of writing, I find that I don’t so much regret whatever I do, but those things I don’t do that I should. As I mature as a writer and a person, I get better at identifying experiences that will force me to grow and chase them down…no matter how frightening or challenging they may be.

Thanks for talking with us! We’re excited to have you as an assistant this year. Good luck!

Discounts and Contest

Have you noticed? WIFYR is offering some great discounts this year.

There are a couple ways to save.

The early bird discount saves you money when you register before April 30, 2013. This is a great way to assure you get the class you want and a discounted price.

Joining SCBWI will also get you a discount. For more information about SCBWI, visit their website. www.scbwi.org

Discounts are not all we are offering. Get excited about the Second Annual WIFYR Writing Contest. This is a great opportunity for a writer at the conference to be awarded $1000 as well as a chance at publication through Familius Publishing.

It will be a great year at WIFYR. You won’t want to miss it.

Interview: Carol Lynch Williams

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Carol Lynch Williams is the backbone of WIFYR. This conference is only one way she has reached out to help other writers improve their craft. The work she does to create WIFYR helps writers achieve their goals as they attend. Carol is one of the reasons we have such a rich writing culture in Utah.

Q: Carol, What is your favorite line that you have ever written or read that someone else wrote and why?

A: I think each of my novels has a favorite line in it. The one that kicked off The Chosen One, a book I had in my head for at least five years was, “If I was going to kill the prophet, I’d do it in Africa.”

The amazing Richard Peck says we writers are no better than our first lines–and I think he’s right. I try to make each line the best it can be. They aren’t perfect the first time through. I work hard at my writing. I want each line to count. And I have friends who read my work and editors and an agent who helps, too. Plus, my daughters.

Still, I love it when I get a line that makes the story unfold for me.

Q: If you weren’t a writer, what would you do?

A: I can’t believe people don’t already know the answer to this question–well, people who know me! I’d be a singer. I think I could be a pretty good Country and Western star, but dang it if I haven’t lived in UT for so long my accent is gone. I can only blame myself, of course. For being accentless AND living in Utah! I try to make up for the not singing part of things once a year at the WIFYR conference. So far we have sung our own take on Bohemian Rhapsody, Bad Romance and Hit Me Baby One More Time (is that the name?), just to name a few. The first song? Paperback Writer. :D

Always fun.

*Q: What does your typical day look like?

A: If it’s a day I can actually write, after I have had a chance for some individual morning study, I go right in to my computer. I try and spend about an hour or two working on the story I am writing. If I am behaving, I don’t do anything but write during that time–but the truth is, I check my email, blog, wonder why am I a writer, complain, stretch, stand up and walk around, get breakfast, complain some more, and think about cleaning.

Once though, I wrote 2500 + words in an hour. And that is pretty darn good for me because I don’t know how to type (and I use 6 fingers to write my books).

There are other things that take me from my writing. I’m a mom, I care for my own mother, I teach classes and grade papers and talk to my friends on the phone.

One of these days I’m thinking about being super dedicated. I’ll let you know how that goes.

Q: When you are stuck in a particular place in a book that you can’t seem to get through, what do you do?

A: I don’t believe in The Muse or in Writer’s Block. Something has gone wrong with my story if I am completely out of ideas as to what to do with a novel. However, when I write, I kind of figure things out as I go: what’s going to happen as the story unwinds, and does it unwind as it should. Does this mean writing is easy for me? No, it’s not. I spend a good amount of time complaining and whining and worrying thinking I will never write another book again in my life, that the first 25 were all a fluke. Does this mean that I don’t get stumped? Believe me, I get tangled up in the storyline. But I am pretty good at picking out knots–and if worst comes to worst, if I let things sit a bit, I can usually figure out what I need to do to get a draft on the page.

When to Bring Your Work to a Writing Conference

Two weeks ago several of the WIFYR staff ran a booth at the Life the Universe and Everything Conference in Provo, Utah. It was great to see so many faces, both new and familiar, as well as several people in costume (I don’t think I’ve ever seen a denim kilt before!)

While I was at the booth, two students stopped by. I told them about our morning workshops (the week-long critique group led by a published author). Hearing about it, one student said to the other, “it sounds fun, but there is NO WAY I’m showing my work to a published author!”

Do you ever feel that way? That showing your work to a published author—or even to other writers—is too intimidating?

I’ve felt that way plenty of times—maybe even all the time. It’s kind of like giving someone a love potion, only you don’t know if the potion will work. You dump all the ingredients into your pot—eye of newt, tail of coat, a piece of honeycomb harvested from a lone tree atop a craggy peak on a full moon in June (do not skip this part). You let it simmer for days, weeks, maybe even months. When it’s finally finished you add it to a glass of juice and hope he (or she) doesn’t notice that there’s a slight eye-of-newt aftertaste. Your paramour-to-be takes a giant swig… you wait… and watch…

“What?” he says.

“Do you feel… different?”

“Different?” he says. “Like how?”

Then he looks at the inside of his cup, and looks at you. You wonder if it worked. Even a little bit. Then your eyes meet… and then…

Well, the anticipation is enough to kill you (if harvesting that honeycomb atop a craggy peak didn’t already). You might wonder it’s even worth the trouble.

That’s how I feel when I share my writing. I want so much for my readers to love every word I put on the page, though I know it still tastes a bit eye-of-newty. There are things that could be better, but I’m so close to the words I can’t see what to change. Sometimes I’m so close to the words that it hurts to change them at all.

That’s where WIFYR can help. Our morning workshops give you the chance to have your writing read by writers who know how you feel, writers who want you to succeed. Each workshop is led by a published author, and these authors were chosen not just for their good credentials (they do have those), but also because they’re kind, dedicated mentors who want to help new writers, just as someone once helped them.

This year I’ll be assisting J Scott Savage in his middle grade workshop (he’s the author of the Farworld series and several others, including the first book in a new series: Case File 13: Zombie Kid).  He once gave this advice to already-published authors: “Be encouraging to [aspiring writers]. The last thing they want to hear is how hard it was for you and how little chance they have of ever succeeding. They want to hear how you overcame rejection and how they can do it too.”

Like J Scott Savage, all the writers and illustrators at WIFYR are invested in giving back to the community that gave them their success. And if you ever get intimidated, just remember: they were once just like you. So don’t be nervous—get your writing out there!

And in case you need a little more encouragement, here’s some feedback from our 2012 conference:

“It was a great environment to be in, especially since this was my first time at a workshop.”
“Having experienced authors makes a big difference. The manuscripts were well-written and the critiques were insightful.”
“My work was given personal attention, we had lots of fun, and I learned so much.”
“[The writing exercises] really inspired me, and the other students were the most talented writers I’ve ever worked with.”
“My teacher not only gave me the tools to revise my work, but also the confidence to see that I don’t need to be afraid of the blank page.”

Do you ever feel nervous sharing your writing? When were you the most nervous about someone’s feedback?

Writing Conferences

Why attend writing conferences?

You’ve heard the term ‘fake it til you make it.’ Writing is like that. Only we work hard. When I decided to write, I struggled to admit it to anyone. I felt pretend. Like I was a fake and somebody would call my bluff. But I wrote anyway. That’s what we do as writers.

We keep writing through discouragement and disbelief. We seek out other writers at writing conferences and learn all we can. We visualize what we want to accomplish and work to make it real. Determination is what it takes to succeed. The people you meet and all you learn at a writing conference helps you ‘fake it till you make it.’

We doubt ourselves and wonder if our writing is any good. We wonder if anybody will want to read our book. Will the agents and editors like it? Will it ever go anywhere?

Because we love to write, we keep doing it. And hoping.

It was validating, at WIFYR last year, to hear Matthew Kirby tell about his journey into publication. He told about his struggles in writing his first book, then moving on to the second at the suggestion of agent Stephen Fraser. Matthew told about taking his laptop with him to campus so he could write between classes. He had doubts along the way. It’s was powerful to hear his struggle, then read his book and fall in love with it. And it was rewarding to hear about his successes after the struggle.

Matthew Kirby will be at WIFYR again this year. So will Stephen Fraser.

That is one of the great things about attending writing conferences. It is motivating to meet people who have struggled and met success.

WIFYR has helped many writers achieve their goals. It pushes us to greatness.

Favorite Children’s Books Now

My children have never read the Bobbsey Twins. They didn’t really connect with that series or some other children’s books I loved as a youth.

But they have connected with reading and the books they have to choose from are amazing. My boys count down to the next Brandon Mull book or search for more Percy Jackson adventures to read. The girls treasure their signed copies from Carol Lynch Williams, Ally Condie and others. Reading has become part of our family culture.

Last summer we listened to “The Clockwork Three” by Matthew Kirby while driving through Yellowstone. When it was finished we started “Janitors” by Tyler Whiteside. Every day the kids couldn’t wait to get in the van. They were as excited about the book as the adventures that awaited them in the park.

As much as I love the books of my youth, I wouldn’t want my family to be without the fantastic selection of children’s books available today.

Preparing for the WIFYR conference motivates many conference attendees to read the books of those who will be teaching. When we meet authors, the value of that experience increases when we have read their books. With fantastic authors who will teach us at the upcoming conference, we have some great reads for this year.

Here are a few:

Carol Lynch Williams

  • The Chosen One
  • Waiting
  • Miles from Ordinary

Mette Ivie Harrison

  • Mirra Mirror
  • The Princess and the Hound
  • Tris & Izzie

Matthew Kirby

  • Icefall
  • The Clockwork Three

Martine Leavitt

  • Keturah and Lord Death
  • My Book of Life by Angel
  • The Dollmage

AE Cannon

  • Charlotte’s Rose
  • The Loser’s Guide to Life and Love
  • The Chihuahua Chase

Kristen Chandler

  • Girls Don’t Fly
  • Wolves, Boys and Other Things That Might Kill Me

Cheri Earl

  • Psst: Secret Instructions Every Girl Should Know

Sharlee Glenn

  • Keeping up with Roo
  • Circle Dance
  • Just What Mama needs

Steve Bjorkman (Illustrator)

  • Don’t Mess With Moses!: Peculiar Poems and Rib-Tickling Rhymes
  • Bring Back My Gerbil
  • The Parable of Two Builders

What are you going to read first?