First Line and Spread the Word Contest Winners

The First Line contest winners are:

1st – Laurie Stradling – prize = 5 page critique by agent John Cusick

First Line: Noura had the curse of cleverness bred into her bones, but learned to hide it on her 4th birthday, the day the Regulators came and took her mother away.

2nd – Shari Maser – prize = 1 page critique by Greg Leitich-Smith

First Line: One strange day, the old corner store melted away like chocolate in the sun.

3rd – Peter McCleery – prize = 1 page critique by Greg Leitich-Smith

First Line: The Space Monkeys arrived on Halloween, so no one noticed.

 

Spread the Word Contest winners are:

1st – Holly Papa – prize = 1 page critique by Greg Leitich-Smith

2nd – Taryn Albright – free book by Trudy Harris, Carol Williams, or Ann Dee Ellis

3rd –  Cari O. Hauptman free book by Trudy Harris, Carol Williams, or Ann Dee Ellis

CONGRATULATIONS ONE AND ALL!

This Post Has 2 Comments

  1. Debbie Nance

    So fun! Thanks for sharing the first lines!

  2. Eloise Freeman

    Congrats to all the winners. Loved reading the first lines! Great comments on character!!!

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